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My Role Model 쓰기 수행평가

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 제목 : Who has the Ambition to Rise higher

We can’t get to the top with skills alone.

Only those who has ambition to Rise higher will be remembered the legend.

My role model is Ambition(Kang Chan Yong) the first - generation 

‘LOL’ progamer.

I explain the reason why I chose him as my role model.

He has the Ambition like his nickname.

His Ambition led him the world championships final.

I think we learn his Ambition.

And He don’t give up easily.

He lost the 2016 world championships final.

But he didn’t give up, he won the world championships next year.

His never giving up influences to me

This is the reason why I chose him as my role model.

My dream is that have ambition like him and will be the person that doesn’t give up easily.

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